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2 hours ago, Ridgewaycynic2013 said:

It's a haiku.  Check your structure.  Had to use poetic license.

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I see why Spock had problems fitting in. 🤨

 

Ah, was not looking at the Haiku structure, my Spock brain was not engaged.  You had Tug, now Tag, so I thought you misspelled Tua.  May I suggest "Tags" instead of Tag.

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Just now, Freddie's Dead said:

 

Ah, was not looking at the Haiku structure, my Spock brain was not engaged.  You had Tug, now Tag, so I thought you misspelled Tua.  May I suggest "Tags" instead of Tag.

 

Syllables: 5-7-5

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