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She never mentions the word addiction, in certain company.

that's good, but the next line is the best IMO. I know, it doesn't count...

She'll tell you she's an orphan after you meet her family.

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Well, I woke up Sunday morning with no way to hold my head that didn't hurt, and the beer I had for breakfast wasn't bad, so I had one more for dessert

 

I hope you don't have to ask.... It's Johnny F'in Cash!

This was my first thought when reading the topic.Was checking to see if anyone else picked this before using it. Glad I only had to go through two pages to find it.

PS Written by Kris Kristofferson, made famous by the man in black

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Doesn't anyone in this thread understand the concept of "line?" Why don't you idiots just start posting entire album jackets?

 

How about the entire song "the end" by the doors... That one is only a couple lines... Lol

 

Yo, I'll tell you what I want, what I really really want

 

This thread just hit it's low... You're an idiot, hahaha

 

This was my first thought when reading the topic.Was checking to see if anyone else picked this before using it. Glad I only had to go through two pages to find it.

PS Written by Kris Kristofferson, made famous by the man in black

 

Kris- one of the best country song writers ever!

 

Did I miss anyone posting the first line of the Shout song yet?

 

"THE BILLS MAKE ME WANT TO SHOUT!"

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That's more than one line... Some people...

 

Do you understand the concept of "a line"?

 

It didn't feel right without a "Hey Mickey" at the end.

 

Dammit! Tom again too! :lol: And I was gonna quote Muskrat Love. Lesson to all the kids out there: Stick w/your first choice! :D

 

I was holding Muskrat Love in reserve. Twisted minds think alike. :lol:

 

This one's for Tom.

 

Seven a.m. waking up in the morning

 

!@#$ you.

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Hello one and all, was it you I used to know?

 

Felonius my old friend, step on in and let me take your hand

 

A world become one of salads and sun. Only a fool would say that

 

Your everlasting summer, you can see it fading fast

 

I hear you are singing a song of the past

 

Any news was good news and the feeling was bad at home

 

Who are these children who scheme and run wild?

 

It's a beggars life said the Queen of Spain, but don't tell it to a poor man

 

I never seen you looking so bad my funky one

 

Savoy Sides presents a new saxophone sensation

 

Rose darling come to me, Snake Mary's gone to bed

 

Kids if you want some fun, Mr LaPage is your man

 

Lost in the Barrio, I run like an Injun, so Carlo won't suspect something's wrong here

 

While the music played you worked by candlelight

 

Cold. Daring. No flies on me

 

Babs and Clean Willie were in love they said

 

And they wandered in from the city of St John without a dime

 

Down at the Lido they welcome you, with sausage and beer

 

In the corner of my eye, I saw you in Rudy's you were very high

 

Up on the hill, people never stare. They just don't care

 

This is the day of the expanding man

 

Hurry the bottle mama, it's grapefruit wine

 

Drive west on Sunset to the sea

 

Way back in 'sixty seven, I was the dandy of Gamma Chi

 

The wind was driving in my face. The smell of prickly pear

 

Johnny's playroom is a bunker filled with sand

 

One plush summer you came to me ripe and ready

 

I was grinding at my day gig, stackin' cutouts at the Strand

 

Bad news breaking in 18A, Missy's kitty turned inside out she say

 

It must have been my lucky Thursday, your daddy went on that spree

 

Teddy's rolling now most every night

 

I'm working on Gospel time these days

 

Attention all shoppers, it's cancellation day

 

In the beginning we could hang with the dude

 

My coat is black and the moon is yellow, here is where I get off

 

Our man Abu squeezes off twenty tracer rounds, and that's where she jumps the turnstile

 

It's high time for a walk on the real side

 

-Fagen and Becker

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Okay... Gotta go deep! Video included: Would ya? Of course if it was 1967... :blush:

 

"It was the third of June, another sleepy, dusty Delta day..."

 

I was out choppin' cotton and my brother was balin' hay

And at dinner time we stopped and walked back to the house to eat

And Mama hollered out the back door "y'all remember to wipe your feet"

And then she said "I got some news this mornin' from Choctaw Ridge"

"Today Billie Joe MacAllister jumped off the Tallahatchie Bridge"

 

And Papa said to Mama as he passed around the blackeyed peas

"Well, Billie Joe never had a lick of sense, pass the biscuits, please"

"There's five more acres in the lower forty I've got to plow"

And Mama said it was shame about Billie Joe, anyhow

Seems like nothin' ever comes to no good up on Choctaw Ridge

And now Billie Joe MacAllister's jumped off the Tallahatchie Bridge

 

And Brother said he recollected when he and Tom and Billie Joe

Put a frog down my back at the Carroll County picture show

And wasn't I talkin' to him after church last Sunday night?

"I'll have another piece of apple pie, you know it don't seem right"

"I saw him at the sawmill yesterday on Choctaw Ridge"

"And now you tell me Billie Joe's jumped off the Tallahatchie Bridge"

 

And Mama said to me "Child, what's happened to your appetite?"

"I've been cookin' all morning and you haven't touched a single bite"

"That nice young preacher, Brother Taylor, dropped by today"

"Said he'd be pleased to have dinner on Sunday, oh, by the way"

"He said he saw a girl that looked a lot like you up on Choctaw Ridge"

"And she and Billie Joe was throwing somethin' off the Tallahatchie Bridge"

 

A year has come 'n' gone since we heard the news 'bout Billie Joe

And Brother married Becky Thompson, they bought a store in Tupelo

There was a virus going 'round, Papa caught it and he died last Spring

And now Mama doesn't seem to wanna do much of anything

And me, I spend a lot of time pickin' flowers up on Choctaw Ridge

 

And drop them into the muddy water off the Tallahatchie Bridge

 

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Hmmm.... So you're saying sometimes you cannot just keep it to one line.... Interesting... Hahahaha

 

The scansion of "Mickey" is trochaic octameter. As such, the first "Hey" is the unstressed syllable of the eighth foot, thus the end of the first line of the verse.

 

But to write it that way - "Oh, Mickey, you're so fine, you're so fine you blow my mind. Hey" - makes absolutely no !@#$ing sense whatsoever (ignoring for the moment the fact that the song makes no !@#$ing sense whatsoever). So I could either drop the "Hey" and present "Oh, Mickey, you're so fine, you're so fine you blow my mind," which is not the complete line. Or add the first "Hey Mickey!" and present the complete line, plus. I chose the latter.

 

Bon Jovi's "Bad Medicine," by the way? Alternating trochaic pentameter and octameter, which is actually a quite elegant verse structure.

 

"So there, mother!@#$er" is a trochaic tetrameter, if you're wondering.

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The scansion of "Mickey" is trochaic octameter. As such, the first "Hey" is the unstressed syllable of the eighth foot, thus the end of the first line of the verse.

 

But to write it that way - "Oh, Mickey, you're so fine, you're so fine you blow my mind. Hey" - makes absolutely no !@#$ing sense whatsoever (ignoring for the moment the fact that the song makes no !@#$ing sense whatsoever). So I could either drop the "Hey" and present "Oh, Mickey, you're so fine, you're so fine you blow my mind," which is not the complete line. Or add the first "Hey Mickey!" and present the complete line, plus. I chose the latter.

 

Bon Jovi's "Bad Medicine," by the way? Alternating trochaic pentameter and octameter, which is actually a quite elegant verse structure.

 

"So there, mother!@#$er" is a trochaic tetrameter, if you're wondering.

 

Big words confuse me... I'm an idiot.... Lol

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