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2 hours ago, YoloinOhio said:

He really sets the scene. Makes you feel like you were there. 

yea he's a good writer...I like the way NYC does it too but this does give more of a story feel...I put another link in my post to what i think is a finished story now even tho he still has the disclaimer on his tweet of not being finished

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27 minutes ago, NoHuddleKelly12 said:

My fav quote: 

 

Note that I’m not using the phrase “but he dropped it” or “it was thrown in the wrong place”.

 

That’s a good one for sure. Here’s another:

 

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...Oliver next to Lotulelei is a force that changed what the offense wanted to do.

 

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5 hours ago, NoHuddleKelly12 said:

My fav quote: 

 

Note that I’m not using the phrase “but he dropped it” or “it was thrown in the wrong place”.

So much good stuff, but I’m going with...

 

“John Murphy comes up the stairs to the press box, head down. He’s a little out of breath.”

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