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  On 10/8/2019 at 3:27 AM, BuffaloBillies said:

In case it helps (I had to look it up): A traditional Japanese haiku is a three-line poem with seventeen syllables, written in a 5/7/5 syllable count. Often focusing on images from nature, haiku emphasizes simplicity, intensity, and directness of expression.

 

 

Cold, hungry, and tired

The Buffalo charges forth

To seek and destroy

 

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I'm glad you looked it up, but you did it wrong ?

 

The first line has 6

I dont mean to be petty

This is really fun

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Haven't done one of these since high school. (That was a long time ago. LOL)

 

The Buffalo defense Killed

Zay Jones lost his roster spot

Sean for coach of the year

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  On 10/8/2019 at 12:31 PM, Dablitzkrieg said:

I'm glad you looked it up, but you did it wrong ?

 

The first line has 6

I dont mean to be petty

This is really fun

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Ha. I guess you're right. "tired" is tricky - I guess that is 2 syllables. The way I say it, it sounds like 1. :)

I'll take out the "and" and change it to:

 

Cold, hungry, tired

The Buffalo charges forth

To seek and destroy

 

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