Beerball Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 link Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. WEO Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 wow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Big Cat Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 Hey, Jesse Bartolis, nobody cares about you. Write an article about K.Mitch and keep [you] out of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Big Cat Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 Hey, Jesse Bartolis, nobody cares about you. Write an article about K.Mitch and keep [you] out of it. EDIT: Just to be clear, Jesse, you referred to yourself 34 times in an article about someone the public actually knows about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FloridaSnow Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 Good God, reading that is painful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/dev/null Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 I go to school at St. John Fisher College in Rocehster, NY where the Buffalo Bills hold their training camp. College That article read like something written by an 6th grader Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gomper Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 WTF? Bet his 3 year old can write better than him! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fred Smerlas's Moustache Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 Hopefully he's not taking a journalism class. That was an affront to the written word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DevilsAlum Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 Welcome to my world. The author's writing was advanced in comparison to the drivel I usually get to read on a daily basis. This current generation of students is unable to communicate via the written word. I would say, however, that the author of this piece does not speak English as his first language. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WWVaBeach Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 Welcome to my world. The author's writing was advanced in comparison to the drivel I usually get to read on a daily basis. This current generation of students is unable to communicate via the written word. I would say, however, that the author of this piece does not speak English as his first language. That was the 1st thing that crossed my mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thoner7 Posted August 16, 2009 Share Posted August 16, 2009 Come on guys, its hard to right articles about the NFL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WWVaBeach Posted August 16, 2009 Share Posted August 16, 2009 Come on guys, its hard to right articles about the NFL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/dev/null Posted August 16, 2009 Share Posted August 16, 2009 hukt ahn foniks werkt fer hym Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jshockeyguy7 Posted August 16, 2009 Share Posted August 16, 2009 Welcome to my world. The author's writing was advanced in comparison to the drivel I usually get to read on a daily basis. This current generation of students is unable to communicate via the written word. I would say, however, that the author of this piece does not speak English as his first language. Maybe they just need a better teacher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SACTOBILLSFAN Posted August 16, 2009 Share Posted August 16, 2009 Simply stunning... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crazyDingo Posted August 16, 2009 Share Posted August 16, 2009 I wanted to commint on the above mentioned article which I read through a link posted on this website about this article. I am usually reading these links when I read that their was an article about the BuffaloBills football team of which I am a fan and though I like to watch their games. I thought the article was good and was intersting too. It was written by a college student of St. John college where he was also a student. I likd the article too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExWNYer Posted August 16, 2009 Share Posted August 16, 2009 He's such a "fan" of the Gints and Mitchell that he refers to the LB not once...but TWICE...as "KAWKIA". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lori Posted August 16, 2009 Share Posted August 16, 2009 Painful. Some of the staff bios aren't much better. Are they hiring copy editors, I wonder? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
todd Posted August 16, 2009 Share Posted August 16, 2009 link Hopefully a chem major. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marv's Neighbor Posted August 16, 2009 Share Posted August 16, 2009 Good God, reading that is painful. He has a future at the New York Times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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