Nice work overall but I cringe at that line. It could have been written better. Does he mean that
a. Marv was away from the game outside of broadcasting work, or
b. Marv is one of the most eloquent speakers, outside of his broadcasting work?
I know he meant "a." but it just makes the grammarian in me cringe...I know, I know, it's a blog, it's supposed to be top-of-mind...
Thanks Lori.