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9 hours ago, BuffaloBillies said:

In case it helps (I had to look it up): A traditional Japanese haiku is a three-line poem with seventeen syllables, written in a 5/7/5 syllable count. Often focusing on images from nature, haiku emphasizes simplicity, intensity, and directness of expression.

 

 

Cold, hungry, and tired

The Buffalo charges forth

To seek and destroy

 

I'm glad you looked it up, but you did it wrong ?

 

The first line has 6

I dont mean to be petty

This is really fun

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3 hours ago, Dablitzkrieg said:

I'm glad you looked it up, but you did it wrong ?

 

The first line has 6

I dont mean to be petty

This is really fun

 

Ha. I guess you're right. "tired" is tricky - I guess that is 2 syllables. The way I say it, it sounds like 1. :)

I'll take out the "and" and change it to:

 

Cold, hungry, tired

The Buffalo charges forth

To seek and destroy

 

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